Rhiannan

One day there was a little girl called narelle she was walking down the street to the shop she had to go down the shop for her mum to get some stuff from the shop for her, she dropped her money in the side on the gutter and when she went to the counter the lady said its $50 dollars thanks? Narelle checked her pockets and said OH NO I have oafishly lost my $50 down the drain so there was a little old lady standing at the register and the lady said its ok here you go little girl have this I have heaps of money so i took the money off her and said thanks oh you one, so I went back home and when I was walking home there was my MONEY still sitting in the drain no one has picked it up iam like to myself $50 dollars I can’t believe it why would no one pick it up I would if I saw it, so i went home and cause I had the 50 dollars in my hand that mum dint see it i put the shopping down and ran up stairs to my bedroom and found a money box withal my other money in it so i put the 50 dollars in my money box and saved it up by the end of the day I was soo tired the next day it was my birthday and all I said to my parents and stuff all I wont for my birthdays money, so the mums like oh why money for wouldn’t you like a present instead so i was thinking the back of my mind na its ok I will save up and then i will go to the shops with mum in a couple of days and get something from the shops so the end of the day came and i was still waiting over the other side of the world my other grandparents where having a holiday or something over there so my mum came in the bedroom and said t me it’s ok ya grandparents know what you want I told them so mum said it might be in the mail tomorrow or Sunday because it was Saturday night was sooo excited to get a letter in the mail with another $50 dollars in it i said to myself eyy iam going to be a rich one in the family soon so it was 7 in the morning I got up and i ran to the letter box and checked if I got any think yet my dad was up reading the newspaper and said to me why are you up soo early I said dad iam soo excited cause Nan and pa sent me letter in the mail with my birthday money in it iam still waiting my dad said to me it wont came till letter so iam like oh god why did i get out of bed in the first place, so I went back to bed and got up at 10:00my mum said hello sleepy head have a nice sleep and iam like well I got 3 hours sleep just then cause I woke up and 7 to check the latter box and my mum said don’t be redickiless i saw you sleeping all night and iam like yeah you did but yeah.....so normally the posty comes around 12:00 mid day s I waited till then and the postie dint arrive so it was almost 5:00 already waiting all day and all night so it was dinner time then bed so i got really peed off cause i dint get my money so i waited till Sunday morning and it still wasn’t there so my Nan and pa came back that night and said we are soooo sorry we dint sent the card cause we dint know how to send it over in another country so iam like it’s ok do u have my present now my Nan and pa said here you go i got it for you i got a card with more money in it and a little pony toy that I couldn’t play with it cause it was brakleble toys my Nan and pa said they had to go home and feed their dogs cause they have been away for awhile, and by that time they went home it was late I had to go to bed and get up early for school the next day. BY RHIANNAN MAGGS 8.60